2nd part of taylors story?

erm wel considering that your 10 that is very good... it just seems like you skip from thing o thing very fast... and you don't explain what the characters look like or there outline or anything... i mean the only thing you told us about Gigi is you hate her and she's dating drew... the only thing about drew is that he's dating Gigi and you love him... and not much about you either... so yeah but its very good for you being only 10! keep writing!